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Wednesday 21 March 2018

Penguin similes

Kia ora everyone,yesterday we made a an animal poem with similes. I decided to do mine about a penguin. Here is my work:
 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Luke
    I like your similes about the penguin and the way you have included a coloured background.

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  2. Hi Luke my name is Kyah i am a year 5 student from grey main school. I like the similes about the penguins and the way you have included colour and pictures. Maybe next time add more sentences about your writing. keep up the good work 👍 😁 Bye for now 👋

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