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Wednesday 21 February 2018

Blue Poem

Hello everyone today I made a poem a blue. The poem that I made didn't need to rhyme but I tried to make it rhyme anyway. Here it is:

2 comments:

  1. Luke, I really like your poem. You have used some amazing descriptive words and I like your drawing of the whale which looks very happy.

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  2. Kia ora Luke my name is Hannah and I am a year 6 in Mamaku hub at Grey Main School. I like the pictures that you have used next time i think that you could change the fonts and start a new line for each new phrase. Keep up the great work.



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