We have been learning how to use adverbs in our writing. Here is my Partly Cloudy writing.
Partly Cloudy
Slowly the geese skimmed through the breeze towards the old oak houses on the edge of the bright blue shimery sea.
As it delivered the cute white babies with blond curly locks, blue eyes, sweet tickly toes and tiny tickly fingers. They also made other animals like puppies, kittens and other animals too.
Suddenly the birds blazed off through pink fluffy clouds.
‘What's this?’ THE CLOUDS ARE ALIVE!!
They’re the ones making the pets and children! Hold on a minute.
What's that grey, sad, lonely cloud doing below the other cloud?
Suddenly the grey cloud makes a ferocious crocodile!
After he made the crocodile the bird came onto the cloud and claimed crocodile.
He wrapped up the crocodile and took it to it’s beloved family.
Next thing you know the bird came back and the cloud had a ram to be claimed. Bam!
The ram jumped into the bag.
By Luke
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