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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 2 November 2018

Comic Strip

Kia ora bloggers, yesterday we had to write a comic strip about two objects in the classroom battling and why one of the objects was the clear winner. We got this idea from the book "The Legend Of Rock, Paper, Scissors".
Here is my work:



Wednesday, 31 October 2018

Explanation T4

Kia ora bloggers
Yesterday the whole of Team Moana (year 5 & 6s) had to do a writing test on environmental problems and three ways to solve them.
Here is my work:

Name: Luke
Explanation Writing - Term 4

Prompt: - - Write to describe one environmental problem and explain what people do to reduce its impact on the planet.

Think about:
  • What your reader needs to know about the topic
  • How you are going to introduce the topic
  • The order of your ideas and how you link them
  • What to include in your summary

Remember to:
  • Choose your words carefully
  • Take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
  • Edit - add or delete words or sentences to improve your work


Start Writing Here:

Environmental problems are problems that people struggle with to keep the world clean and green (a fresh environment). One environmental problem that people struggle with is litter. That's why I’m give you some reasons on how to reduce the impact of litter.

One way to reduce the impact of litter is too casual go around your neighborhood and pick up rubbish. Yes I know, I know this tip was bound to come up but trust me It works. You can set a time for you to do this for an example: Start at 11am and finish when ever you can’t see any more.

Another way to reduce the impact of litter is too reduce, reuse and recycle. A lot of people say this but yet they don’t do it. To reduce you need to only buy the things that you will use and make a compost bin or a worm farm. To reuse you need to take reusable shopping bags when you go shopping and reuse glass jars to store and freeze food. To recycle you need to make sure you buy recyclable items and put all acceptable recyclable items in the garbage dump when you are finished with them. Don’t keep this simple yet effective tip to yourself tell all your friends and family so they can do it to.

One more way to reduce the impact of litter is to ditch the plastic bags, stop using disposable plates and learn to repair items instead of throwing them away. By doing this along with the other tips I’ve given you, you will definitely see a cleaner greener and healthier neighborhood.

I really hope you learned something while reading this explanation piece of writing. If everyone helps to reduce the impact of litter then we would have a much nicer world. Well thats its for now folks,goodbye!



Thursday, 18 October 2018

Poem about Grandma

Kia ora bloggers, yesterday we had to write a poem about about our grandparent(s). I made a poem about how great my grandma is, here it is:


Tuesday, 25 September 2018

Ski Trip daily diary

Kia ora Bloggers
A few weeks ago we started to work on a project called our ski trip daily diary, which basically holds all the info of what we did on each day. Here it is:

  

Tuesday, 14 August 2018

Animal Report (IN PROGRESS)

Animal Report (IN PROGRESS)

Kia ora bloggers, a few days ago we started to do a project called "Animal Reports". My chosen animal was a "Nautilus" more commonly known as the "Green Gecko". We also did an animal report last year, my animal last year was a "Giant Panda". I really enjoyed making that. Here is my work(So far):

Tuesday, 24 July 2018

Expectations for Term 3

Kia ora Bloggers today I'm going to tell you about some of my expectations for term 3. First and fore most the theme for this year is "Learn From Yesterday Change Tomorrow", Term 1 & 2 are based around "Learn From Yesterday" and term 3 & 4 are based around "Change Tomorrow". Since this term is based on "Change Tomorrow" I will mostly be talking about things that are predicted to happen in the future. Firstly I think we should base our learning around the so called "Hover car/board" I think this is something I would really enjoy doing. Another thing I want to talk about (and something I kinda know we are going to do) is Mount Ruapehu like I said, I'm guessing  we are going to do it because we are going on our Ski trip there. Thank you for reading this have a nice rest of your day.

Wednesday, 13 June 2018

Waitangi Experience

Kia ora everyone my name is Luke and I'm here to talk to you about my trip to Waitangi,
Enjoy:

Wednesday, 21 March 2018

Penguin similes

Kia ora everyone,yesterday we made a an animal poem with similes. I decided to do mine about a penguin. Here is my work:
 

Thursday, 15 March 2018

Using "than" similes in a sentence

We have been learning about similes using "than". We matched these pictures to make it our own .


The rubbish                           is smellier than
a sock
The girls hair              waved in the wind more than
a flag.
The lion                                  is braver than
a warrior.
The owl’s eyes                     are rounder than
a plate.

The elephant                  is sturdier than
a tree.

Wednesday, 14 March 2018

Using "as" similes in a sentence

We have been learning about similes using "as". We matched these pictures to make it our own 

The rubbish                           is as smelly as
a sock
The girls hair                   swayed in the wind as if it
was a flag.
The lion                                  is as fierce as
a warrior.
The owl’s eyes                     are as round as
a plate.

The elephant                       is as sturdy as
a tree.

Wednesday, 30 August 2017

5 Senses 2017 W6

DARK 0’CLOCK


Do you hear that? Its the sound of bright yellow pee dripping from the top of the toilet. My life flashed before my eyes because of All the worn out beds with dead blood thirsty bodies trying to haunt you at night. The floor is like an elephant's dry bonny skin from the 80’s. Its as if the roof was about to be crushed by king kong. The room is like a vampire's top secret lair. The walls are about to burn into crips because of the dark black ashes hanging from the ceiling.  

Tuesday, 15 August 2017

Up Coming Science Fair

Kia ora everyone,
This term we have been focusing on the up coming science fair. My group is doing a bottle rocket, a bottle rocket is a bottle filled with baking soda and vinegar with a quark on top of the lid. It also has pencils stuck to the the side with duck tape for stabilisers to support the bottle when its being tipped up- side down. The members in my group are ,Rico,Tae & T.A. Here is a picture of my reading group doing one of our experiments.


Friday, 30 June 2017

Zoofari

Kia ora
This week we drove to Auckland Zoo to go on an epic Zoofari!!! When we got there we were introduced to the old elephant house where we saw a young lady named Tasha. She explained the rules about the Zoofari and told us where we were going to sleep. We all had a FANTASTIC time on the Zoofari and saw a lot of animals that none of us were expecting to see!! 

I recently finished an animal report about a panda. Little did I know that I wasn't going to see a black and white panda.....but I did see a red panda! It was so fast!!!  
Ka Kite ano.

Monday, 19 June 2017

Argument Writing

Last week we did some work on our argument writing for the speech finals being held at kaikohe Here is my speech:(Hint I'm a back up for the finals)
Stop the Hackers

You have all heard the news. Some company has had to close its doors for the day because their computer system crashed. Why!! Someone hacked it, of course.  I believe that people should stop hacking. Hacking is stealing private data from other people's computers or interfering with computer systems so that you cause serious problems.  I believe that people should stop hacking.
Here are my reasons why:

Firstly:    Hacking is a big, fat threat to all humanity. It’s a ginormous menace and this is why. Hackers can steal people’s accounts that have incredibly private information such as passwords, emails, addresses, bank accounts and much, much more. Now that’s just plain rude!! Hackers get into people's computers and start trying to get private data. They could steal all your money. AND THAT'S NOT GOOD!!!


Secondly, hackers can mess with people’s work and  jobs and some jobs are really important for health and safety reasons.  Hackers can stop  important things happening like medical treatments for cancer and surgery. Some hackers have found their way into computer systems of hospitals and messed up so many records and appointments that the hospitals have had to stop work for the day. AND THAT'S NOT FUNNY.


Finally, hackers can put fake information into places. Imagine trying to get a job and finding out that hackers had changed your records so that it looked like you had no qualifications. Imagine how you would feel. The opposite can happen too. Hackers can change records about criminals to make them look good. Then you might end up hiring a murderer to babysit your kids! NOW THAT'S DEFINITELY NOT GOOD!!!

So, I’m sure you must agree with me. Hacking is horrible, hurtful and harmful to humans.  It robs people of their belongings, it can put people’s health at risk, and you will never know what is true and what is fake. It should be stopped once and for all!!  If you are out there and you are a hacker, please STOP!!   Stop it, right NOW!!!

Friday, 2 June 2017

Onesie Day

Kia ora
Today we had an animal onesie day because we are fundraising for the year 1 & 2 zoo trip. Our group dressed up as zebras. Zebras are members of the horse family. They are mammals.
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Thursday, 18 May 2017

Using Sim/Meta In a Moment In Time

This week we looked into using similes & metaphors. First we write down four similes and four metaphors. Next we write down a moment in time and showed it to our buddy's so they could check it finally we published it to our blog and this is our final product:


Thursday, 13 April 2017

My Digital learning(Storyboard That)

This is my Storyboard That vocabulary web.Storyboard That is a website that you go on to create your own storyboards. Our teacher wanted us to base our storyboard on a book called The Anzac Puppy. She took words from the book and put them on to a doc then I had to collect 6 of those words and put them into a storyboard  and put the meaning and add pictures. I enjoyed it greatly:)

Friday, 31 March 2017

Narrative story

This is my narrative story,(We had to make up a myth and explain a phenomenon of our choice) mine is how the world got made. I have used Adjectives,Adverbs and grammar. Hope you enjoy!
Aeakai And The Dark Dragon
Long ago, before earth had a name,there was this lonely planet,it was as black as coal not a single life was to be seen.One day that planet started to rumble! and rumble! The planet started to crack! and crack! All was down for the lonely planet of darkness, it desperately needed some help! Earth was cracking and rumbling so much that out came an egg out of nowhere and it started to hatch. What hatched out of the egg you ask? Out hatched was this one dragon and that dragon was named Aeakai. Incredibly over powered He had the power to Make strong mighty Blizzards! He also had the amazing power to make it extremely hot! Aeakai can make some incredible hail! And last but not least he can make it epicly windy! Aeakai was unsure how He go these fantastic powers, but he was sure how to use them in a good way. He used these powers to make Earth a lively place Aeakai looked around him, there were beautiful green trees fresh meadow grass all seemed good. But on another planet far away from earth there was this egg that was about to hatch…… Bang! Boom! Bang! The egg hatched, Into an evil dragon named Poyu! Poyu saw earth and wanted to crush it smash it until nothing was to be seen. So Poyu flew over to earth and started to crush and smash Aeakai’s creation! Aeakai saw the terrible mess that was happening.   
Aeakai flew up into the air and used all of powers combined to attack Poyu!
But all it did was deflect of Poyu and hit Aeakai! Aeakai came crashing to the ground!  Aeakai stopped and thought while Poyu continued crush earth, Aeakai needed to find a way to attack without Attacking. He thought and thought, Aeakai had an idea! Do you want to know what Aeakai’s idea was?Aeakai flew up into the air very weak but still holding on! He started to spin around in circles faster each time until……….. HE CREATED A TORNADO! Poyu got dragged up into the air into outer space!(and then died because of oxygen loss) Then Aeakai was going to use his powers to fix earth but he would die! Aeakai was brave so he used his powers to fix earth and died but don’t worry Aeakai is always within our hearts and that today is why we have the lovely planet earth that we call home:) 

Friday, 3 March 2017

Learning how to survive in water

Today the gang is in pool learning some survival methods ,with the swim for life people! We learned tons of stuff The first one was making a chain which is better in rough waters. The second one  was a line, the line is better in currents. It was such fun learning how to survive in water!
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